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 	</div>
 
 	<div class="info-card"><p>By choosing the location and language of your
-	audience, you'll improve the quality of viewer engagements and your organic
-	retention rates, which can boost your rankings significantly.</p> </div>
+	audience, you'll improve the quality of viewer engagements and boost your rankings significantly.</p> </div>
 	<div class="info-card"><p>
 
-	An appearance of popular support will give you the perceived credibility
-	critical to your success, Increase your social proof, and build a stronger
+	Improve your brand's image, increase your social proof, and build a stronger
 	relationship with your audience.</p>
 	</div></div>
 	</section>
@@ -178,22 +176,19 @@
 
 		<div class="collapsible"><button>Why should I choose Trendplays?</button>
 		<div class="content"><p>Buying views and engagements is easy and safe
-		if you buy from a reliable source that will not create the wrong kind of
-		attention. At Trendplays, we ensure that the traffic we send to your content is
-		from real accounts with years of history, and it is sent
+		if you buy from a reliable source. The traffic we send to your content is
+		from real users with years of history, viewing
 		gradually over a few days.</p></div></div>
 
 		<div class="collapsible"><button>What if my audience finds out?</button>
-		<div class="content"><p>
-		While that is a real risk you take with your team, at Trendplays we
+		<div class="content"><p> At Trendplays, we
 		pride ourselves on our capacity for discretion and professionalism.
 		</p></div></div>
 
 		<div class="collapsible"><button>Will my account be safe?</button>
 		<div class="content"><p>
-		While there is some risk of disciplinary action from social networks,
-		it is rare and mild because of the difficulty of enforcing any clear rule
-		against buying account activity. If buying views were made a breach in
+		While there is some risk of disciplinary action,
+		it is rare and mild because, if buying views were made a breach in
 		the TOS that resulted in a ban, then anybody could send those views to
 		their competitor's account.
 		</p></div></div>